Sunday 27 March 2011

Communication Is A Virus: Written feeback for Group 6.


Written copy of my feedback to be delivered with our paired group- #6 on Monday morning's de-briefing session.

Feedback from Group 4 to Group 6
Written by Sophie Wilson

Overall, we felt very impressed by your project- your blogs evidenced a wealth of primary and secondary source research which was well linked through your design practice to your design context. A good range of source material demonstrated your design developments well.

We felt that the outcomes had been well considered, and the experimentation was evident. However, you could perhaps consider expanding this further by altering the scales of your written quotes, the locations (perhaps in a slightly more “safe” environment- where they would be seen but not trodden on- by a plinth or statue in a park perhaps?), and even the material used to create them- perhaps experimenting with colours, textures and different typefaces also.

We also feel that you could consider the further documentation and feedback from your outcomes- whilst it was evident that it was a success to a point- it would have been interesting to gauge people’s responses in a questionnaire or personal quote- finding out whether this would inspire them to go on and read further.

A really strong project, evidently showcasing good team work and a balanced effort; but, most importantly- answering the brief in a professional and creative application of design.

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